tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2190399868556435621.post2997307370351871988..comments2023-05-12T01:20:38.926-07:00Comments on A Walk on the Weird Side: Turn to Page 123RK Sterlinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01034917381901499281noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2190399868556435621.post-55736396378848490692007-03-17T08:53:00.000-07:002007-03-17T08:53:00.000-07:00Thanks, Charles, Steve and Avery for sharing. You'...Thanks, Charles, Steve and Avery for sharing. You've all got some great stuff that leaves me wondering what will happen next.RK Sterlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01034917381901499281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2190399868556435621.post-841654022043302122007-03-16T18:18:00.000-07:002007-03-16T18:18:00.000-07:00Resonance dodged through a sea of nodding, dejecte...Resonance dodged through a sea of nodding, dejected hobby animals. She missed a smiling whale by inches, but then stumbled over a half-buried pig whose now missing spring had at some point succumbed to gravity. She managed to keep her footing, but the delay was enough.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2190399868556435621.post-75216363261346803462007-03-16T13:40:00.000-07:002007-03-16T13:40:00.000-07:00Yup. Chapters usually only run a couple, three pag...Yup. Chapters usually only run a couple, three pages. Fast-paced, me.<BR/><BR/>In fact, I'm thinking I might take out that "the"...<BR/><BR/>Page 23 was a little better:<BR/><BR/>Stagger stood, relaxed and still. Despite the heat and the dark closed room, his skin was cool and dry. He listened to the blood hissing through his body and waited for his moment.Steve Malleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17561234111786788616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2190399868556435621.post-44729074717578370562007-03-14T14:47:00.000-07:002007-03-14T14:47:00.000-07:00LOL, Steve. Is that the whole paragraph?LOL, Steve. Is that the whole paragraph?RK Sterlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01034917381901499281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2190399868556435621.post-55167389118995596362007-03-14T14:01:00.000-07:002007-03-14T14:01:00.000-07:00“The fuck is this?”Yup, it's dialogue....All that ...“The fuck is this?”<BR/><BR/>Yup, it's dialogue....<BR/><BR/>All that copying and pasting from individual chapters to get to 123, and that's what I got.<BR/>came up with.<BR/><BR/>'The fuck is this?' Fuck is *that*?Steve Malleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17561234111786788616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2190399868556435621.post-64669890031503989522007-03-14T11:00:00.000-07:002007-03-14T11:00:00.000-07:00Cool, Charles. Now I'm wondering if Morris is huma...Cool, Charles. Now I'm wondering if Morris is human or something else,and why is stalling for time?<BR/><BR/>Nice.RK Sterlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01034917381901499281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2190399868556435621.post-87945667797528372762007-03-14T08:20:00.000-07:002007-03-14T08:20:00.000-07:00Here's my piece, from a work called "Where it Wand...Here's my piece, from a work called "Where it Wanders."<BR/><BR/>Morris licked at his heavy lips with a pale tongue but managed to control the shudder that threatened to break free in his muscles. His eyes darted around the room as he stalled for time, darting over stained orange chair and warped table, over frayed brown carpet surrounding sway-bellied twin beds.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.com